All Comments on 'Gambler's Luck'

by PapaOoMowMow

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
crap

no sense in just doing it once it will eat at you and drive you apart total waste of time.

PapaOoMowMowPapaOoMowMowalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks, anonymous! I know what you mean!

Um... what do you mean?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Total Shit

It had a good storyline idea but you left it when you could have had it rolling. I mean the sex with little build up then nothing. Sorry but poorly executed.

kaidmankaidmanalmost 11 years ago
dynamite

I liked it as it was a simple story for a quick cum its only issue was it ended abruptly and we didn't get to know what all happened in vegas has his trip wasn't a day trip you should do a sequel where they go back to vegas and they talk about the rest of their last trip to vegas together as well as what they are going to do on their new trip

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