by BenevolentDCC
Erotic, yet moved the story along. I think most of your readers are looking for more games between Owen and all 5 girls, with more group sex play.
OMG that was a good story from chapter 1 to now. I cannot wait for your final chapter! Great job!!!
As others have said, this is a great story and even if the next chapter ends "Game Night", I hope you continue the story of these people as there should be way more to tell.
Your story has captivated me. You capture emotions well and I love all the perspectives. Cannot wait for more.
I absolutely love your story. You hit every item off my dream list. Great story I never want it to end.
So erotic, I decided that Mankind kind are in danger from you! ;-) you are one of rare gem in here. Love conquering all. Give yourself an time, piece of erotica story aren't to be rushing.
Masterfully written - didn't expect less from you, but it's still incredible how you keep delivering. This time, there's even some plot, that hint of jealousy and more characterization, between all the non-stop sex. I wonder where you'll take it next.
I'm still bitter about the whole harem setting. It's strange that I have less of a problem accepting the idea that Kat would desire her own brother than the idea that 5 women would be willing to be in a poly relationship with a single guy (and somehow each other I guess - it's just a story). Even if it's just for a single, crazy, otherworldly night, I'm not buying it.
But maybe, in yet another nod to your skills, I'm just jealous of a character in a story.
I ploughed through all the chapters....skipping chunks that were boringly repetitive. By the end I was totally confused and past caring. I expect you write well, but please cut down the word count as it quickly lapsed in and out of meaningless drivel.