All Comments on 'Game Night Pt. 05'

This is simply magnificent. One of the best.

I ploughed through all the chapters....skipping chunks that were boringly repetitive. By the end I was totally confused and past caring. I expect you write well, but please cut down the word count as it quickly lapsed in and out of meaningless drivel.

Late to the party, but loving this.

Masterfully written - didn't expect less from you, but it's still incredible how you keep delivering. This time, there's even some plot, that hint of jealousy and more characterization, between all the non-stop sex. I wonder where you'll take it next.

I'm still bitter about the whole harem setting. It's strange that I have less of a problem accepting the idea that Kat would desire her own brother than the idea that 5 women would be willing to be in a poly relationship with a single guy (and somehow each other I guess - it's just a story). Even if it's just for a single, crazy, otherworldly night, I'm not buying it.

But maybe, in yet another nod to your skills, I'm just jealous of a character in a story.

Damn good vant wait for number 6

So erotic, I decided that Mankind kind are in danger from you! ;-) you are one of rare gem in here. Love conquering all. Give yourself an time, piece of erotica story aren't to be rushing.

I love this series and can't wait for the next part.

I absolutely love your story. You hit every item off my dream list. Great story I never want it to end.

Your story has captivated me. You capture emotions well and I love all the perspectives. Cannot wait for more.

As others have said, this is a great story and even if the next chapter ends "Game Night", I hope you continue the story of these people as there should be way more to tell.

Wonderful chapter. Please keep writing

Keep it going, can't wait to see what happens next.

OMG that was a good story from chapter 1 to now. I cannot wait for your final chapter! Great job!!!

Erotic, yet moved the story along. I think most of your readers are looking for more games between Owen and all 5 girls, with more group sex play.

yawn