by BenevolentDCC
You are amazing writer, balance between storyline and emotion. 5 stars!
The start felt like development at last, but really all this was clear since Pt. 02 at the latest, for better or worse. All the relationships were revealed early on, the characters are just confirming it over and over. No surprises. And that's smart too - it's an erotic story, most readers only want more of the same, repeated in slightly different shades.
Thank you at least for the change of pace and flipping of tables to trying to avoid orgasms - it's another brilliant and creative twist on the action to keep it fresh. And it worked. I really enjoyed all the scenes, without exception, if possible even more than in any previous parts.
Ever hoping for some actual story to go with the beautiful characters and scorching sex.
Any info on when to expect the final chapter? Assuming you still are planning to stop with part 7 as previously indicated,
Also, I just found your stories today and have been periodically reading for hours. Masturbated 3 times. They're fantastic! You're a skilled author. The writing style is inviting and easy going. Thanks for all you've put into this series.
I second the comment below in inquiring on the next chapter and if it'll be the final one. I feel I'll be checking back daily hoping for an answer. Thanks for this fantastic series! The characters are a delight and your writing is magnifique!
OMG this series has been completely different than so many other stories. The combo of sex ,romance, incest and watersports is sensational. I hope to see the next installment soon (please?).
One of the most creative and engaging stories I have read. Also emotionally erotic. Please continue.
i just skipped through everything, the explaining of the game rules and all the talks are such a turn off
I feel like I miss the whole page between pages one and two, but that's just a minor speed bump. Great story please don't stop