All Comments on 'Gamers Pt. 02'

You're not writing fast enough! LOL Just kidding. Please keep it coming. I'm enjoying this story, like your others.

Pity about Kasia, but looks like Dean has an opportunity for his two loves, gaming and his new found sex life. Thank you.

You had me hooked until page 2 then it turned to shit , ruined it

for a good read this AM Thanks for the effort.

Could you explain what I was doing right until page 2, and then where it 'went to shit'?

If it's something that I'm willing and able to fix ...

Really clever story, keep going! If some toad can't think long enough to give you an example of what is wrong, skip it and consider what it's worth - - nothing.

Enjoying the story. Ignore the criticism.

Great story and while i knew something was up i did not expect what happened. Way to keep it interesting.

Onto the next!

The ex-wife decided she liked lots of dick behind my back before I found out. The wait for STD results is one of the most nerve wracking, probably second only to an "I'm Late" test. But thankyou for showing the responsible side of life. Getting tested matters.

This is probably the only dirty story I've ever read where someone gets tested for STIs. Good for you for normalizing. Also there story was hot.

ok i gotta say i felt the guys pain it took me back to those days...you have an incredible gift with words i cant wait to read the rest of the story...keep up the good work

Been some time since I was in college. This however brings back a few very not so great memories. Stupid shit happens in college, but nobody has the right to hurt someone that badly due to their stupidity.

Good writing on a subject that so many go through. The class pump always has issues, but finding you're in love with a slut... wow you wrote this well.

Well, that happens. For me, it was at the point when despite always wanting to meet, all we did was have sex, on the 'third date', I said that it was obvious that was all they (singular) were with me for, and that I was calling it off.

My sister had acted like this, and our friends being mutual, I was in on the gossip before I graduated.

No thanks.

Whoa....oa...oo. That was a sharp turn we just made. But something tells me Kasie is still gonna be the protagonist

What a surprise Kasia was a complete slut. Serves her right, but now she has introduced our hero to all the girls and l think he’ll do just fine in this fertile garden. Kasia the little bitch will miss out and get left behind.

5/5 for the bitch getting her comeuppance

I can tell you Dean is not the only one who got into a situation similar to the one you describe. Been there done that, got the official key ring, coffee mug and t-shirt. Great story!

2 stars. don't like lying in a relationship to date others.