by Brutalhawk
Interesting to read the "why" at the end of the story, but the "why" was only half complete. Then again, I do not understand "why" women like to be "taken" rather than participating
The beginning and end are well written. From the moment he got on the bed until he got off (adolescent humor intended), it is heavy with melodramatic descriptors. Fiery lance. Heaved his hairy ass. Mighty spurting squirts. Makes the sex the weakest part.