by AspernEssling
to handle the diverse relationships well, showing a growing maturity among the group and a growing awareness of choices among the core (and especially the narrator).
Good job. I look forward to seeing each of these chapters as they emerge.
But, Bravo! You spin a delightful wee story.
I've been a fan of your work for a while now and I got to say that you seem to know how to write a good story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Saw THAT coming...
The giveway was Simran changing jobs, and lunching with Ian.
Excellent chapter with a nice twist and great potential for complication at the end.