All Comments on 'Gary to Gigi Ch. 01'

Damn this needs a second chapter!!

Seconded: Does it ever need a second chapter :) well written, good grammar, hot as fuck, damn, WRITE FASTER!!!

I'd love to be with a shemale.

Other than a few minor typos, this was a great read, Looking forward to chapter 2. Rereading, or an editor for the typos would be nice, but there were few and far between, so easily dealt with... Hopefully not a long wait for #2

Very hot story

Can't wait to read it in bed again. In my nightie. Lol

I know I am echoing a lot of the comments but that was so very sexy! Oh to be Gigi! I am glad it was titled chapter 1...hope there is more!

Excellently written and damn hot! Gigi is a great name too!

Continue! You realy make me feel like Gigi!

Can't wait to see Gigi's evolution into a real slut!

So well written and perfectly paced. Got me so wet all over! Want more! Now!

Xoxo, Di

The premise & narrative was good but you're good enough at telling a good sexy story to deserve truthful criticism. Your story is filled with spelling errors, gramatical mistakes, & problems constructing narrative & they get in the way of this being a well written story. You need to avail yourself of a good volunteer editor & learn to grow your considerable writing talent because you've got promise my friend.

I'd love to be Gigi, except with big white cock! I want to become a cock sucking, cum swallowing slut and a cock fucked nymphomaniac!!!

delicious sexy and wished it was me im leaking badly here

god i’d give anything to become dave to dana ❤️❤️❤️

I crossdress and I have a boyfriend. If I looked good enough as a guy to totally pass as a pretty girl, I would be on hormones so fast it would make your head spin.