All Comments on 'Gender Reversal'

I had a bit of difficulty keeping the characters straight (especially the one that kept jumping bodies). Other than that I liked the story.

You should consider a rewrite, and don't be afraid to let the story be longer,...I wish I was better at giving criticism...It felt like the story was going somewhere but after the doctor came to John's apartment all forward momentum seemed to stop. Atleast it felt that way to me...idk...i suck at this...

You never readdress the mystery door thing, the ending was sudden and disappointing, and you seemed to be building towards something that suddenly didn't arrive. It was fairly disappointing, I had such high hopes from the first half and then things suddenly changed into a quickie sex scene and then, "Oh it was all a dream, haha."