All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles - Gemini Epilogue'

When can we expect more? >.>

Also one thing that kinda got on my nerves is the repetition of saying what happened. Yes we know shes covered in cum, dont need the following three lines to repeat that. Besides that and the whole 'stood' thing when it should be 'standing', thats just my opinion, stood around doesnt sound right when compared to standing around. SO i give you a.. 4, cause I can so gimmie more.

Well thank you for your advice, I'll try to take it on board with the next few, you can expect more reasonably soon as the next couple of stories are a filler set between this storyline and the next one.

Also I'm working on another genie story which is going to cross paths with this one in a big way somewhere along the line, so look out for Genie of Resurrection, coming soon.

Story was well-written and interesting.

However, I feel like it somewhat drifted away from its origins. By the end, the fact that this was a sex genie story was nearly lost altogether. Were there even any wishes in the last 2 chapters?

Also, especially considering the ratio at the end...1 male to 5 females...the absence of futanari was fairly disappointing.

That said, I'm looking forward to your next stories.

I loved the strory, especially chapter 9.2, but I feel that the dream at the end leads to quite a few unanswered questions. Such as, what vessel will be built? What was that dream? What happens to John and his harem? etc.

I really hope this story will be continued, may it be a direct sequel or another related story. I really enjoed reading the story, it was fluent, enthralling and sometimes so exiting i literally checked in 3 times a day hoping for the next chapter to arrive.

You did a good job combining the sexiness of the characters and their story with the downright cruel (sometimes a bit too straightforward evil antagonist) parts of the story so that i was disgusted by it but couldnt read it fast enough to hope see the sorcerer fail and die.

I cant wait for the next chapters, so please dont let this story wither and die, because you did very well so far!

I'm looking for Genie of Resurrection, but after you give us that, please don't forget John Arthur Hardru and his bunch of beauties! Sooo many possible storylines are in Gemini that I can't figure where you will go next....

To anyone who's read these stories thus far, I am working on the follow-up to this and another genie story linked with it, please be patient.

thats some exiting news :) thanks for the update

I'm so glad i decided to check up on this story. I'm glad to hear that you will be making a sequel and look forward to reading it when you get it out. :D

Beginning to end you had me hooked the sex was so hot as well just loved it

I just wanted to ask if you're still working on this or your other stories you've mentioned? Even if you don't or won't continue this, for whatever reason,please tell us.

My curiosity and eagerness to get my eyes on a new chapter is just killing me :)

I loved this stories it had harem,sex,fight, and other dijin although I wish you would continue I would like to know more of the Valkyrie that joined them as well a what he did with the gifts he received

Loved it all of it I need more though please

Damn, what can I say. I loved the hell out of this story. You incorporated, Norse, Far Eastern mythologies into a tapestry that literally blew my mind, Kudos to you, I only wish that I could write half as good as you. The sex notwithstanding you kept me thoroughly and completely interested. I really wish you would continue this story at some point so I could learn what "John" did with his "gifts".

Anybody there? And are you going to be writing anymore soon?

Great story!! Can't wait for more from this author!

Good sir, are you still writing? If it is on a different site please let us know. This is an awesome story, and you tell a great tale.

And You completed it which puts you ahead of any other sex genie story that I've come across so far. I certainly enjoyed the rather long epilogue, a bit surprising after the incredibly short final battle with the demon. You may have mixed a few mythos up, but you tell a fine story. This was written a while ago, are you still writing? Maybe using another name or on a different site, or even commercially? 'cause you are good, and I'd like some more please! Thank you for a happy ending for these sweet sex genies and friends!

Good ending...

I really enjoyed this story. Hope to read more in the future. Thanks for sharing this.