All Comments on 'Getting Caught'

Those sitting in a glass cage should always be carefull and not throw stones!! I gave it a 5.

I guess that revenge is sometimes best served while your sitting down. A good fun quick read.

My what a tangled web we weave when we attempt to deceive. more twist than a curly fry. cleaver, very cleaver, Short and sweet. nice Job!

This story just made my day.

Hoisted on her own petard.

And well-constructed, and thought through thoroughly, though my one sticking point is ' word choice '.

Voice recognition software, if that's what you're using, still is not good enough, maybe never will be.

Three homophones and one misguided apostrophe. not a lot, but this was just one page.

A very very good read nevertheless, and in the tradition of HDK, the twist is worth it :)

Cheers and Thanks,

Kilroy

Great concept, well written story-----thanks.

You, my friend, have grown leaps and bounds as a writer since your first--and still very good--submission.

Keep up the great work!

You just became one of my favorite authors. Well Down

Some of Jason stuff didnt make sense. The evil-wife here was cheating with Jason, we know this because it was revealed in the last video. So why did she turn around and think to herself " oh Jason must have been cheating on grace?". She knows he was since it was with her.

Also grace doesn't get to serve papers on Jason? This is her payback time too, so you should have added more actions and dialog from grace to the tale.

I really did enjoy it.

I was wondering WHY Sharon was so convinced that Frank was cheating on her. Now I know, cheaters always project their bad behavior on everyone else. Of course the breadth of Sharon's betrayal is great and all the players were there to confront her. Looks like she isn't going to have any friends left since she is fucking all their husbands. The guys won't want her for anything other than a fuck since they all see how loose she is. Very nice short work. A bitch got exactly what she deserved.

A Quintessential Loving Wives story, without 10 pages of expounding on trust issues, infidelity, forsaking all others, and the details of cancelling bank accounts, etc.

Short, sweet, and just plain (no not Bob), but Excellent!!

What can I say but - "Ditto", to all the good remarks.

Write more!

Thanks!!!

it may be a 'Flash' story, but done well. damn, i miss Papatoad's stories.

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Sure there were some small holes here and there, but overall excellent!

It was a zippy little tune.

Well written, short and to the point. Amazing final twist of the blade I mean go for the jugular! Ummmmm.... Pun intended! LOL.

Oh super...

Short, (not so) sweet and quite creative. Well done! I look forward to future submissions.

It might have been done before, but if so I've not ever seen it. I laughed when I got to the end and realized that the two spouses who were cheated on both got their revenge on the ones who were cheating on them. (^_^)

Nice twist.

-Risq

This one made me smile. Short, concise, and to the point. I liked it!

Thank you and keep writing.

This is like Judo, you let your opponent do all the work! Had me laughing

Nice twist, I thought it would be more typical but you turned it around well done. Definite worth read!

Turn about is fair play!

Short & to the point. I loved it! All the glee before the game is played is almost always a mistake.

Thank you.

No excess element and no way that anyon could cry wimp! Well yes if he wanted to spend time as a guest of the state then he could have had a nice public burning of the witch, but ---- I wonder if Grace even knew what was going down?

Fun story. I liked it.

Gary.

Very cleverly written with wonderful twists. Loved it!

Very well done. Thumbs up. Hehehe.

Well done.

Excellent and short and sweet

If ever a mouse roared loader than a loin this is it... Thanks a lot. love this story.

Hahaha... Nice.... totally unexpected. Good work as always, but I am patiently waiting for more of the Contract. hint hint.

John

Nicely done :)

A nice twist with multiple divorces and collateral lawsuits for alienation of affection. I guess infidelity are the grounds here lol

A lesson for her, you can outsmart yourself.

liked the ending thanks for the work

Good story and good ending thanks for the entertainment. Please write some more along this line.

Ignore anon's stupid remark. Undoubtably this person loves the wimp cuckold husband type of story. Speaks volumes of this person's character.

Good Job!

Attacking an author for his/her story is so juvenile. Comments on the plot or characters are acceptable but attacks on the author are not. If you don't like the story say so and move on. It is after all A STORY. It reminds me of some young asshole with his hat on backwards giving me the finger when I tried to point out that the passenger seat belt was draging on the street. You can lead a horse......... Thanks OH. I appreciate the effort you put into all your stories. Jim

I rated it 4**** and almost rated it 5***** and would have if it was longer. However, it was just to short for the highest rating.

Poor Sharon! She went from cloud nine to the pits of Hell before she switch emotions. Frank set Sharon up; however, in fact, she set herself up. In any event, I believe everyone deserves a second chance. Therefore, after the divorce, if not before, I would advise Sharon to move to another city where she is not so well known. That way she can leave her past behind and perhaps get remarried and be good little wife.

give that hole in your face time to heal

I hate your fucking guts you fag.

Now, the story. Nicely done! I can't believe I missed this little gem. I will be looking for more of your work!

Good without violance revenge story.

Excellent short story. I don't give very many 5 star ratings but I did for this one.

Thanks and write more!

in short form, catching, payback & retaliation, No time for remorse. TK U MLJ LV NV

How dumb can a person be? I've seen stupidity but this takes the proverbial cake. Trying to catch your husband one time when you've been screwing everyone else?

Hilarious.

Short, neat and complete. It was also a lot of fun!

His wife was a slut. He knew it. He knew she was going to try to cut his balls off. In the end she fucked herself. Beautiful irony!

It's fun to see someone with such a twisted sense of justice write a good yarn

I think this was one of the better revenge stories. I hate it when the characters do violent things to get back at the other person. Revenge is best if you leave them and hit them in their pockets.

An original way to seek revenge with plenty of interested spectators!

Thanks for sharing. Short but sweet.

Normally I like works that have a plot & some character development - a back story if you will; this is actually my first Flash Story

A little humorous revenge is always good and this quickie hits on cylinders - it flows & is easy to ready & I love the turn of the screw at the end

THX

G

I look forward to your future "flash story" production. Thanks for a fun read with an appropriate outcome.

but, as in the three bears,

it was not too short, or too long,

but just right.

; )

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A lot of content, twists and turns in a nice short story. Great job, really enjoyed it.

Hell of a first effort! Good job!

Short, sweet, excellent!

I join the many other admirers of your skill at wringing perfection out of the minimum space allotted by a short story format. You are a most skilled writer.

Short, but to the point...

This was worthy of more than 5 stars.

And what a unique way to BTB. Although since she was cheating with half the world you would think she might have been a tad more careful about her planned revenge, knowing full well that she was cheating with multiple people. Well played Bob!

Also you have NO writing skill whatsoever ! Obviously "1*" you deserve.

sorry that you have to put up with idiocy of some peoples comments

grateful that you don't delete the vitriol & trash

thanks , for sharing your writing with us

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a very clever , well written , ultra short flash story.

and a very well deserved 5 stars from me

Must say a fine one love to read that

I still liked it.

The start of it was Grace getting revenge on Jason.

From his reaction he was cheating on Grace.

But he was not on any of the video.

So where was her revenge?

but where was....

The start of it was Grace getting revenge on Jason.

From his reaction he was cheating on Grace.

But he was not on any of the video.

So where was her revenge?

Better read the end again Tw0Cr0ws...

"Frank clicked a third time, and then it was Frank's boss going down on me."

Jason is Frank's boss!

For real true details of an actual serial cheating wife visit Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. 50ish grandmother and college instructor in Helena Montana. She lost that job because of details on Facebook. While being involved in at least two extra-marital relationships she coerced one of her students into sexual relationship.

Tattooed-blk widow, purple rose-breast-implanted and penchant for degrading sex. Wanted golden shower on clit, stuck tongue in student's asshole and licked it-her idea-begged to be called a whore, wanted ''Take that bitch!!'' facial, and loved bringing cream filled panties home to panty sniffing husband.

One time she had lover rip panties and bra off her during sex. She had to teach class afterwards. Stood in front of class obviously braless under thin tight sweater and cum running fown her legs. She wrote lover she got chills feeling his seed ooze down and knowing the students in front row could see it.

couldn't understand a damn thing, sorry.

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka ANON!

but when its self inflicted, who cares, TK U MLJ LV NV

I noticed that a number of commenters gave this story a one. These anonymous are obviously on the lower side of the IQ scale! They are probably rednecks who voted for Donald Trump. If they can't understand this story maybe they should go back to reading their comic books.

Rednecks voting for Trump????

Hmmm

Guessing you voted for the serial enabler who aided and abetted ol billy boy clinton getting his willie slicked...whose top aide was married to the condescending pervert antony little weiner.

While I cannot find much admirable about donald he is certainly more qualified and much more reputable than a female who would aide in the personal destruction of a number of females her predatory and sexually harassing husband

With a straight face and an indignant tone she railed about conspiracies and expounded on her husband's fidelity.

Anyone who voted for that pathological liar is a nattering numbskull not worthy of being associated with rednecks.

By the way dummy, rednecks-also aka blue collar union workers...the stalwart voting block of the dems.

The condescending elite of that party-such as yourself do not even recognize their own party demographics.

Basically you are stating it was lifelong democrat union workers that elected the donald...

Better him than frgid rigid hilly

works real well when hate is included, TK U MLJ LV NV

Don't know how I missed this story but I'm glad I found it. You have suspend belief a little but it still is a good flash story. Don't you just love it when a plan comes together though. Thank you for an entertaining story.

I loved the video of another worse video. Why kill just one when you can blow up the whole neighborhood with the same bimbo bomb?

Cheaters think they are so coy and have all the angles covered. Thanks dad that was a great save. Hooyah, BTB and her conspirators!

When you have a husband or wife who, with nothing to go on, constantly makes remarks to indicate that he/she 'suspects' that you're cheating, open your eyes and WATCH THEM VERY CLOSELY... because it's highly likely that they're already cheating and feeling guilty. The suspicion is a subconscious hope that they're not the only one who's doing the wrong thing and catching their partner will give them the edge to put them on the defensive so they won't catch THEM.

5 stars for an excellent Cunt Crusher story.

Another excellent story with a twist. What a surprise for a.lot of people. Why would a serial cheater get so upset about her husband potentially cheating on her? Good job.

Really nice -- 5*

'Your' is not the same as 'you're'

'Queue' is not the same as 'cue'

So far you are two for two. You have a unique way to tell us about a cheating spouse and from the reviews I've read most readers seem to enjoy your tales. Also let me thank the people who pointed out the typing and grammar errors in the story. I was enjoying the style and flow of your submission that the errors went unnoticed so let me add my own words: shame, shame, shame. Now I have to find another of your stories to see what further twist you will create. Hell, I might even read look in another category just for the fun of things. Oh, yeah. This is a 5 star for sure.

Very good little story, really great twist.

That's great! Another nice twist, Sharon's banging 4-5 guys and Trying to catch him with one. Then you have her sleeping with Elaine's husband, just piceless...

...great story. 5 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

That was a surprise.

I wasn't expecting that.

Do not ask for whom the bell tolls it is for thee

Great story

I love these kinds of stories...

Brilliant twist

Lolololololol. I love stories where people burn themselves

OldHideki hit a.homerun with this one. Good stuff.

Brilliant

It's a very fun setup, but for some reason, it reads like the parts were played by really bad actors.

Oh yeah, I really liked this one. Thanks very much for it.

Awesome story really imaginative great twist loved it.😁

Great Story!! Loved it!!

risas!!!

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