All Comments on 'Getting into Trouble'

by phoenix90

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OvercriticalOvercriticalabout 6 years ago
Where's the Story

If you extracted the sex description....there's nothing left worth talking about. Perhaps that's all that can be expected from many authors, but I like a little plot to go with my sex. But, do save the sex description: you can use it in another story with some meat on it. 2*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Romance???

There is no romance here, it's just a fuck story 3 stars

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