All Comments on 'Getting It'

I know where you were going with this, I think, and you got your ideas out, but it didn't flow very well. I'll give you points for making this very current and using the new National Harbor in Maryland. ;) But if you could find an editor, I think it would be a huge benefit for you. There were some misspellings (it's Reagan, not Regan), and various punctuation errors, and things like that. But by all means keep writing -- you have to practice to improve!

My one piece of advice for you is not to interject the little real life kind of tidbits like the fact that it takes men longer to get undressed than women. It interupts the flow of the story.