by James_Steele
Soooo good!!! PLEASE don't make them swap with Arnie and his daughter. IMO, that would ruin the story and for me, I wouldn't be able to read it anymore. Hope it doesn't happen and that there are many more chapters to come. 5 stars!!
Looking forward to the meeting with Alana and her father.
Will they share?
Please don't exchanges their daughters especially Riley and Chance.... They are really lovely couple and I love them both.. So please don't make they're story bad. Please please author just make them happily ever after.
Please go back and continue Getting to Know Daddy. I noticed from the comments that many of your readers want you to finish the series, but most do not want them to swap. Maybe that was where you had originally planned on going, and was the reason you stopped writing the series. May I suggest they try a soft swap (having sex with their daughters but in front of each other). That could progress to where the two women had some fun while their father's recharged. These are just suggestions I mentioned to show you that their is still a lot of possibilities left with these characters.
Chance should work Riley until
she is a three hole whore for him, fucking everyone he says5
What happens when he bets her preggers? Do they get married and move somewhere to live as man and slut wife?
He has the right name, took a chance and got her mother pregnant now taking more chances of getting her pregnant which could be disastrous. might want to think that through.
"The way her body moved with his was so in tune it felt like they'd been fucking each other for years, and Chance realized no matter how many years they would have together he could still never have enough of her." Shit man, that hits deep. Brought a tear to my eyes contemplating the depth of it. This is the kind of paragraph I expect to see at the very end of an epilogue of a deeply romantic story. Kudos!
Also, fucking in the sand... that shit gets everywhere. EVERYWHERE! No sensible people fuck in the sand. But it was super hot so I'll allow it.