All Comments on 'Ghost Lover'

I'm not really into the long drawn out buildups, or the ridiculous detail in some stories. But, this story just seems a bit rushed - the sex scene is one paragraph. I really like the concept, would have liked it more if the house itself got involved and not just the ghost, but would like to see more detail in the dialogue, in the characters, in the sex, everything really. I'd say this is about half of a really nice story, so I give it a 50%

The story was a little rushed but it deserves a follow up to take this lady through the three weeks. The adventure could be fun. Scaring the plumbers and electricians. Sex anywhere without guilt or anyone knowing it, could be good.

say that she entered into the spirit of things,but it really was the other way around.

You'r stories are good, but not enough of anything. Not enough story (we never even meet the husband, know nothing of the wife, the history of the house, or about the ghost lover. Your story, while good, is like all of your stories - little more than a good synopsis.

This story needs to continue. So far you have skimmed the surface of a great story.