All Comments on 'Ghostly Cuckold'

the story was pretty good and the development of marks attitude along the way was very smooth. you wrote in the blowjobs without making a big deal out of it being man on man so it flowed with the rest extremely well. also a little humorous, which is always good for smut. good job 😏

I enjoyed this story. I like how you made it build up slowly. You could see something was happening, but until Mark found the journal and put two and two together did it become completely obvious just what was happening. You even left us with a bit of a mystery on what really happened to Dan. Overall, great story!

Just one thing to say--WOW!

plz write seq have him find out it dan son come to cuckold him

Wtf

I love how the story builds up and flows, seeing Dan take over the bedroom to make Mark a cuckold. I would like to think it's Dan's baby!

excellent

Excellent story enjoyed it all

Great story have read it a couple times you could add a few more chapters

Have read this story more than once gets me hard every time needs more chapters

Great story needs part 2 and 3

I think this was your best story! I love the supernatural theme combined with the innocent wife being turned into a sexual dynamo! 5 stars from me!