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"What have I done?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoI love this story. Gian and Dee feel so real, relatable, and not cliche like so many characters on this site. Congrats for not making the Italian guy all slick suits and sports cars, and not making the black girl have "mocha skin", a tiny waist matched with huge ass (not to mention "raven hair" and "almond eyes") and the personality of a dish rag :) So boring! You rock. I'm liking the sisterly bond too, and the bond between Stefan and Gian. Hope you keep keeping it lite on the cheese, and bring bag the stylish girl In her sundresses and Afro! but whatever you do, please finish it!
ApplejuicexDover 9 years agoI like how Denise is really chill and blunt which makes Stefan perfect because their practicly the same but the one thing that bothers me most about Dee is that she overthinks stuff why to much and so does Gian its so annoying. Please write more Im hooked!!
Anonymousover 9 years agoJust spent the entire morning reading all seven chapters!
Damn damn this was good. Ready for chapter 8...through 15.
Reesie263over 9 years agoGreat to have you back and even better with this amazing chapter, amazing story. I love these characters and love that they are finally coming together, but why is she crying?!?! Please dont have her regretting being with Gian. Hope you'll be able to update soon!!!
P.S. Are we getting an update with Murphy? Just wondering, just asking.
