All Comments on 'Gift for Robert Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
bargain bin incest

Kept my cock hard even though I didn't cum! For some evil reason I really enjoy incestuous fuck tales and this one, although short and to the point got my cock hard and ready to explode in my hand. Not as good as exploding in a pussy - but better than a wet fucking dream!!!!!!

gaynudist50gaynudist50about 8 years ago
Not Bad

I think it would be awesome if he got both pregnant.

duke0467duke0467about 8 years ago
Good effort, but

No this isn't a rant about how badly written your story is because it is not badly written at all. My comment is you always seem to stop telling your stories before the end is reached. The therapist made the comment that she should find a way to be invited over to there place and you never went back to that. I have noticed this in many of your stories. You seem to tire of the story and just write "The End" when it really isn't. I decided to ask you to finish this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Description

My only criticism is lack of physical descriptions. Do they have hair etc. 5 stars.

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