All Comments on 'Gift of the Demon Ch. 01'

Welcome to writing. Despite your saying this is longer than normal for you, this story is pretty short by itself. I will happily look forward to more chapters. A few spelling and grammatical errors, but still an easy and enjoyable read. Try to find a good editor to help you enhance your story. Also be more descriptive, but not too much more. You missed opportunities to expand and add flavor and color to your story all over the place, especially in the sex. Good start, I hope you have load of Good feedback and enjoy your writing experience.

Last bids of advice, ignore the naysayers and haters that have nothing constructive to offer you and a lot of hate and negativity. They will come regardless of how good your stories get and they are not worth acknowledging.

Good luck and I look forward to your next installment

PS, if you want an example of an author who started small whose creativity took them to great heights, try checking out the work of Etaski and her red sister series start to finish.

Hope to see a following chapter soon.

the sex description seemed rushed

I'm certainly interested to see where this series goes

I hope this leads to more chapters. The beginning had me immediately pulled in

this seems pretty good