All Comments on 'Gift of the Gab Ch. 01'

Where is this marry-go-round going? ...TOO many 'names'/bodies in a few short para. to even begin to make sense of. A party with no where to go.

The best I can do is offer the opinion that this submission is...NON EROTIC...

This story has far, far, far, far too many characters. (1) the reader has a hard time "getting to know" each character. (2) The story doesn't develope the characters well, just commenting on them in passing.

Re-write the stories with 3 or four characters and show some appreciation of the characters by elaborating on who they are and what they like to do (for sex).