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Anonymousabout 20 years agoPoint of view.
Uh oh. This story begins in the third person, and then switches to first person.
emu_pabout 20 years agoAuthorIntentional
I intentionally changed from the 3rd person ie me the writer to the 1st person in an attempt to make it read like Jane was reliving her experiance!!Does it read funny then?
Anonymousabout 18 years agoSickening
Cmon why is this women with her SICK barstard of a husband for fucks sake he and the other pig raped her so stop fucking trying to make her look like she enjoyed it
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