by TheHandThatWrites
Pretty damn hot! I liked the slow start, the apparent nervousness of the couple. It seemed to make the story that much more credible. But then it picked steam, and how! You did a great job with the "dirty talk" dialogue... that's difficult to do well and not come off sounding cheesy.
Very hot! Kudos.
Well done. I really enjoy this kind of story, I wrote a similar one myself. Thanks for writing.
I printed this story out and read it to my wife in bed. We both masturbated then fucked blisfully. A very erotic story. Hopefully more will follow.
My girlfriend and I was reading the story and acting out the story.I made her cum while she jacked me off at the same time with me shooting all over her erect nipples and ample breasts. Hot story.Keep up the work.