All Comments on 'Ginger'

You have a nice writing style, and considerable potential. I hope you will continue to share your work with us. Congratulations on your first submission.

I think it was very soft on the BDSM elements but will work for some. For me I would have liked it to seem as if it was more realistic, more about the mental aspects than sexual encounters. I get the feeling it is not written from first hand experience and even the sexual responses described seemed more Mills and Boon than real. I would encourage you keep writing, research the subject you are writing about well, and perhaps try imagining yourself as your characters to give more meat to the writing.