All Comments on 'Girl'

This story really made me want to know more about the process of hotel pillow calibration and the people who do it for a living.

I agree the hotel pillows part were the best parts of the story. The rest was gay cliche' city. And if caeneus took a literacy test, I think he'd flunk, and surely get an F in composition.

awesome and real feeling trans representation :)

I think this was a beautiful and well written story. It is refreshing to see something like this. I wish there was more sex, but It managed to be vulnerable, accurately representative, and hot at the same time.