by Ana_Lingus
At least we know what she looks like (four chapters in). Consider a scenario where she accidentally "forgets" to turn off her webcam and the poor guy has to watch Chad destroy his girlfriend in ways he never could.
I'm back to giving you 3*'s for this chapter, in consideration of the fact that you moved the story fractionally forward...
Keep the stories coming. Please!
I like the way you're leaving a lot to the imagination. The build up has been fantastic thus far. You have my attention.
Hi, I really like this story.
Like others have said, please make a chapter 5 of this series.
Storyline is more ludicrous than most porn movies. The pacing is very slow as well.