All Comments on 'Girls on Film'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Hot!!!

This was really hot. Thank you.

gnome_mangnome_manalmost 9 years ago
I think it needed a little more backstory

Everyone is suddenly enslaved, but who is the Master? How is he doing this? A little hint would be good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good job!

I like the way you interwove the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More

Would love to see more of this!

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