All Comments on 'Give It Up'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it!

Short and poignant! Love the internal conflict in Jessica. Love the frustration experienced by both characters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
If you are still active

I just wanted to let you know the intensity and tension in the story is delicious and sent throbs and shivers all over my body. Amazing story and I hope you will contribute more. Thanks. ;)

dorkybutcutedorkybutcuteover 8 years ago
more?

wow. my only wish is that this was longer! excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WOW

this is an amazing start to what I hope will be a series. I really wanna see how this story plays out

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