All Comments on 'Glen Burroughs High School'

First: you need an editor.

Second: pick a verb tense (past tense or present tense); and stay with it.

Third: a nude high school? Really? Good fiction requires enough plausibility to allow the suspension of disbelief.

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It was an interesting concept. Try again.

It is silly and lord do i need a editor, i don't think you realize how many times it took me to just write that :P haha

i do agree with you about a story being more plausible, my idea would never happen, so i think to me it sort of hurts the overall story. i may do more, i have no idea... thanks for the comment :-)

I wish my high school had a program like that.

Who doesn't want to see nude teens?