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"Gone," The girl said scrunching her nose. "What do you mean gone?"
He took a deep breath and calmly said, "To heaven, least that's what they tell me."
The little girls face slacked, she looked around slowly before looking back at the boy and throwing a glossy book she had hid behind her back at him. "You want to look at a magazine," she said as it hit the floor and slipped across the dusty boards, stopping at his feet.
He looked down at it and then up at the girl and then back down again and said, "sure, I guess," bending over and picking it up.
- COMMENTS
200K11 months agoGood story!
To the people complaining about the grammar... yes, I noticed some spelling and grammar mistakes, but 11 pages of writing, felt the % error was very good. The complaining posters can volunteer to edit stories here.
I enjoyed the read!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoCould have been a rather nice story but grammar and spelling are important. Missed the mark by quite a bit simply due to those important pieces.
Nabzapokovabout 2 years agoI found it hard to ignore the incorrectly used, and misspelled words. I finally decided it was purposefully written this way to show a southern dialect. Ignoring that, I found the story hot and enjoyable. I'll read part 2 if there ever is one.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI enjoyed reading this. Being from the south I understood your use of words. I don’t usually read long stories but this one kept me guessing. Well done 5🌟
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis is the best thing ive read on this website yet could there be,or is there, another about the boy and girl
