All Comments on 'Gobbled'

Not going to lie... This badly needed context. The beginning was so frustrating to try to understand because there is no set-up whatsoever and the random inclusion of the Jane character with no mention of her prior was confusing. There is no description of fhe environment until the end, which means readers have no idea what to visualize and really this whole thing felt like it was 10% of a story and the other 90% was just left out. I dislike leaving negative comments but this story needed more work before being published.

And looking at the number of readers, I’m not the only one who enjoyed the story. But haters gonna hate. Disregard the venomous spit masquerading as critique.

an animal who gobbles and struts, TK U MLJ LV NV

As such, when I got to the part of him being flex-cuffed and taken I completely melted. Well, all but one part of me.

Ticklishsoles

Very enticing...the richness is in the details and your verbiage was exciting and a very enjoyable read! Pleasant journey! Thank you for taking us with you!

The only thing that would have made this better would be if the man where Jane's son... (Chloe's brother)