All Comments on 'God Save The Devil Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Pretty Hardcore stuff. Loving the revenge. I am in love with the pace of your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Nicely building it up towards your revenge. I can sense it. You sincerely need to spice it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
fasten the pace

Going nice till now...really nice plot but you have to make it spicier( you know what I mean)

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