by GeneraZ
That means a lot to me coming from another writer, and a damn good one at that.
I finished the Secret Lives of Goddesses 01 and moved on to this, and I'm really enjoying your style and pace. I'm into this whole world, diggin' it you might say. The idea of a supernatural beauties and sex-induced gradual change like you describe is so good, well, I'm a little jealous. Obviously the futanari angle requires a good premise.
I liked the scene here with Lina. Then the way Marla and Eva catch up on family, with only a token mention of each daughter, where nothing is said and the undertone is one of alienation, well.. coming from a geographically dispersed family I thought that resonated so well.
We aren't done with Eva yet... she just needed a moment to chill out before Parts 3, 4 and 5!
Will there be more to this series? cant tell if the ending is the "The End" or its a cliff hanger.