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by BlueFish11

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WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 8 years ago
Pure fantasy

Nothing but the acts. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Utterly impersonal and cold.

JulianWinslowJulianWinslowabout 3 years ago

Neither "impersonal or cold". It is clearly focused on the erotic act of giving and receiving pleasure

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerr12 months ago

Very good! Caught the eroticism of the act without any clutter.

Wish I could write short stories

5 stars from me ;->

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~ Sex is more than an act of pleasure, its' the ability to be able to feel so close to a person, so connected, so comfortable that it's almost breathtaking to the point you feel you can't take it. And at this moment you're a part of them. ~ Unknown