All Comments on 'Golden Keeper Ch. 07'

but this chapter seemed to be basically a connecting chapter, with some background information, character development and sex. Not much actually happened. It was also shorter then the others, so I was left with a 'that's it?' feeling at the end. Sex was good though. I love May and Grant and Emmett. They are great, deep characters with some mystery still surrounding them. The world and the situation they are in is also intriguing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter which will hopefully be a bit meatier and have a bit more actually happen. Thanks for writing!

A nice mix of some background and present time. Eager for the next chapter. PJ xx

just saying you spelt 20 wrong, it's supposed to be vingt. Anywayz, the build to the sex through the chapters was really hot but the actual sex let me feeling a little meh