by betweenthesheets21
good story, well written, and great initial build up. but when he finally gets his release, we have no idea where the piss goes. the wife apparently is into WS so I was hoping he'd soak her face, clothes and cunt with his golden stream. instead it seems he wasted it in the dirt by the car. the story was hot so I gave it 5*s but was a little disappointed.
Same question as the previous commenter - where did he actually pee? Good story, but could be better with those details provided. What about letting loose on her while she's sitting on the seat of the car and telling us the effect on the interior of the car?
Fantastic story. I really enjoyed it Like the other two who've commented though I'd love some clarity over whether Jackson did his wee in the car or the parking space.