All Comments on 'Goldie the Superhero'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
weird

Very weird. Not nearly as hot as the first two stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Crazy twists

Strange turn in Goldie's story, but I thought it was awesome! This other strange character, foe or heroine partner? Can't wait to read more to find out!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Cool stuff! I really liked how Goldie was pretty much defeated by this other vixen, but then in desperation her intention reversal saved her. Really cool how through the intention reversal, this nympho leanings of the other heroine transferred its way into Goldie. Oh the future possibilities! I like this other heroine character too. Would be cool to read more of them teaming up or conversely fighting each other more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

awesome story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

"The roar of her powerful electric motor softened to a purr"

Great story but electric motors don't "roar"

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