All Comments on 'Golf-India-Romeo-Lima Ch. 03'

Continue to love this story, although my editor lens is noticing the misuse of "to lie" vs "to lay" & then using "to lie" form correctly plus missing "s's" for an appropriate plural form for "brain" & other nouns. Yet, I'm so empathetic for Chris sensing she's going to lose a big chunk of what she used to have with Sasha if not the whole relationship. This isn't polyamory for her. Most likely she's going to lose Sasha. I so hope you prove me wrong. So beyond edit notes, mega kudos for great writing. Looking forward to more.

This is the first chapter where I noticed idioms that were a little strange. I think your editors missed some things they should have caught but it certainly didn't ruin the story.