by AC_Pandorra
This is the first chapter where I noticed idioms that were a little strange. I think your editors missed some things they should have caught but it certainly didn't ruin the story.
Continue to love this story, although my editor lens is noticing the misuse of "to lie" vs "to lay" & then using "to lie" form correctly plus missing "s's" for an appropriate plural form for "brain" & other nouns. Yet, I'm so empathetic for Chris sensing she's going to lose a big chunk of what she used to have with Sasha if not the whole relationship. This isn't polyamory for her. Most likely she's going to lose Sasha. I so hope you prove me wrong. So beyond edit notes, mega kudos for great writing. Looking forward to more.