All Comments on 'Gone Fishing'

by yummicreme

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bigglesbigglesover 10 years ago
hot but short

It needed a bit more build up and I would prefer some more visual imagery, but the idea of "what the lubrication was" really is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
It was just getting started

Would have like to heard about the whole week.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WACC

LickYourYoniLickYourYoniover 1 year ago

What a lucky camping trip!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice story but the anglers should have kept her with them all week. I do love the image of her laying there still breathing heavy and shining with sweat as he returns. Love that they all took a turn on her.

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