All Comments on 'Good Girl vs. Slut Ch. 14'

Just dorks write or use "spunk" given most readers accept "cum" as the term better understood. Also enough with the ism's known just locally that leave readers confused and wondering what it is.

Great job ... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Too distracted with the story to notice any of your "isms".

Excellent, among the bests i have read. Congratulations! Very talented writer