All Comments on 'Good Intentions Ch. 03: Training Day'

Until Mike kills either one of them and it does not make a difference which one. They are identical turds

BDSM, Fetish or Non-con maybe?? But with a name like yours and a story like this, you're not going to do well in the loving wives section where some sick person abuses and tortures another human being. Ugly story.

1 star

If you were trying to write the worst LW story, congratulations, you succeeded.

Now go away.

Otherwise, just predictable, ugly, and at this point un-fun. Finish and reboot ASAP

BTW, with some thought and creativity, you could have written a similar tale WO all the crap

BTW Two, Ugly and distasteful are not the same as Dark.

The end of How I became a chastised cuckold, now that's dark.

Needs to be put down like a dog. Hope Mike does him in right after he does her.

Most stories use past tense verbs. So should you.

This author seems to have finally run out of garbage to write and just disappeared.

Will we ever get a continuation I like this series