All Comments on 'Grace's Jacob Ch. 02'

by Loving50

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IdiotsavantIdiotsavantover 8 years ago
My vote to continue

If ended here, it would be fine, but I would like to see one more chapter exploring the beginning of their relationship. Also, would be interesting to see the reaction of his son and daughter-in-law to the relationship. Great story.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Unfinished Business

IMO these nice people could have a wonderful conversation about where their mutual interest in each other might lead. That would be fun to listen in on. Neither needs to rush in and maybe mess up a chance on some long term happiness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Of course

This should be continued. There is obvious unfinished business.

bruce22bruce22over 5 years ago
Excellent Story

up to here. without an ending it will stop being interesting.

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Still married, still a mom and now even a grandma! I originally wrote my biography when I was in my early 50’s. Now I’m in my later 50’s and don’t know where the time went. I still seek passion in life but I’ve found ways to fulfill that fairly well. I haven’t written in a...

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