All Comments on 'Graffiti'

by Ashson

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ChrisTor22ChrisTor22about 9 years ago
Not one of the "Caught" stories?? LOL

I love when girlfriends get caught being naughty....especially by someone like Frank!! Keep up the volume....makes for a good start to the day!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Maybe fewer stories?

Then maybe you'd get an okay one? This was just bad.

BayneBayneabout 9 years ago
Twas all good!

Don't sweat the dissenting opinions, as this was good stuff. If I had to give any critiquing criticisms, there is some editing that needs to be done. That said, I more than got the gist- keep 'em coming, it was good work! :-)

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 9 years ago
Interesting . . .

how the nasty comments are always anonymous. It makes it so much easier to dismiss them as they deserve.

As always, a well crafted & amusing short story. I do enjoy your writing style & would very much like to see what you might do with a longer series allowing us to get to know some of your characters more intimately.

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