by Ashson
how the nasty comments are always anonymous. It makes it so much easier to dismiss them as they deserve.
As always, a well crafted & amusing short story. I do enjoy your writing style & would very much like to see what you might do with a longer series allowing us to get to know some of your characters more intimately.
Don't sweat the dissenting opinions, as this was good stuff. If I had to give any critiquing criticisms, there is some editing that needs to be done. That said, I more than got the gist- keep 'em coming, it was good work! :-)
I love when girlfriends get caught being naughty....especially by someone like Frank!! Keep up the volume....makes for a good start to the day!!