All Comments on 'Grand Opera'

He is opera lover?.... but he cucks neighbours.... are you nuts?

OK ... enough trying to understand the confused "anon" who posted the first comment. It's a fun story - thanks for posting!

The dialogue and action are too stiff, and not in a good way. I visualize as I read, and this is bad acting. It also races through the story too fast. Had you slowed down and made it a three page story, perhaps it would be more relaxed, arousing and fun.

has a good theme, but the writing is kind of generic and the sentence structure and grammar makes it hard to follow.

Stilted conversations; too much hurrying up to the next item on the “Dom Bull controls slave couple” checklist. Couldn’t make myself finish.