All Comments on 'Granddad'

by WirdSmiff

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Northpacific2017Northpacific2017almost 6 years ago
Love it

Thank you for sharing, a fun read

NorthPacific

phlxxlphlxxlalmost 6 years ago
Nice turn in the end! enjoyed it very much.

Thx for posting. Will there be a follow up? I dearly hope.

Artorius9Artorius9almost 6 years ago

One of the most original I've read in a long time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Liked Very Much

A very enjoyable read, I do hope there will be a follow up about what happened on their holiday.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More

I would love a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Holiday

Beautifully crafted. A quality piece of writing.

RRC2RRC2over 3 years ago

I love the playfulness of this from the yellow bikini to the twist at the end.

Thanks

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Cute Read***

Thanks for sharing.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 3 years ago

A perfect appetizer. Deftly presented to prepare the taste buds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The story is good but the continuation is not the one shown. I would suggest numbering the stories so that they can be read in the proper order.

Anony Mous

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