All Comments on 'Granddaughter's Treatment Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Such cruel and unusual punishment deserves rectification!

Josiah's misogyny and sexual repression led him to treat Rachel harshly in a misguided attempt to "help" her. Now Rachel and Emily are both being abused by Conrad, a young man who has no such benign intentions. I hope Josiah will become aware of what Conrad has been doing and force him to marry Emily (especially if she is pregnant) and depart. Then he may accept his own fate, which seems to be to become and remain Rachel's lover for the rest of his life.

Clearly, we need a proper ending to this unusual story.

wannabe_submissive_virginwannabe_submissive_virginover 8 years ago

i like the idea of marbles in vagina. loved ur story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please come back and continue!

This is one of the hottest stories I've read on here! Can you please come back and finish it? I've read these few chapters over and over! I need more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ohhhh yes

Your story is so hot and inventive. More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
LOVING this story!

Please continue this story! This one is THE best here on Literotica!

ionutza1000ionutza1000almost 12 years ago

Can you please continue this story? It's great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
EXCELLENT!

Can you please add more to this!?? This is totally HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hot hot story loving the marbles.

goodgirl45goodgirl45almost 13 years ago

You can keep going! The story i great!

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