All Comments on 'Grandpa's Rite of Passage'

by MisterReason

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Horny old bastard

Nice racket the guy has going, banging all of his granddaughters. Perverted but as fiction it was hot as hell.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Yes perverted, but I sure would like him to adopt me and fuck me. . . . .I love old men.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pathetic

It took a really sick, disturbed motherfucker to write this story. I hope in real life this pervert does not have daughters or granddaughters.

RapidResponderRapidResponderalmost 8 years ago
Bravo!

Extremely well-written! Appreciated the manner in which you skillfully and subtly induced the reader to attempt to discern our young heroinne's age! In addition, the well-placed bits of humor were, for the most part, witty and spot-on. Though I am not a big fan of this type of content, your submission was so well-done that I couldn't pass up sending you some kudos. *****

MisterReasonMisterReasonalmost 8 years agoAuthor
To the anon re:Pathetic

Amazing how somebody reading stories correctly placed in the INCEST category can be disturbed reading a story about incest. Anyway, It's fiction anyway knucklehead.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Pretty good

These rite of passage type stories are always a favorite of mine! Nicely done.

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