All Comments on 'Grandson's Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I hope the ending means you're going to carry on writing this Story. If so then great start and looking Forward for more

StoneKidmanStoneKidmanalmost 9 years ago
Excellent and erotic

Very hot story I really enjoyed it. I do hope you continue writing but I would love to read more adventures of grandma

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Very good story

Many young men can benefit from proper training and discipline. Mothers are reluctant to control son's behavior, Grandmother is needed

UserFormerlyKnownAsGuestUserFormerlyKnownAsGuestalmost 9 years agoAuthor
For those of you who enjoyed this story

Chapter 2 is currently in rough draft limbo while I'm finishing work on a different story with a somewhat different theme. Suggestions and ideas for chapter 2 are welcomed, so if you have any request for the next chapter send them to me. Thank you.

eye84ueye84ualmost 9 years ago
Update?

Chapter 2 almost complete?

UserFormerlyKnownAsGuestUserFormerlyKnownAsGuestalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 is pretty much done.

I'm just proofreading and polishing it a bit before it gets submitted, so expect chapter 2 to be released this following week.

Peeperguy29Peeperguy29over 8 years ago
Punishment

Farting in his mouth ????? Come On ...... 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

He's got to fuck his grandmother. That's the best part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Granny & you

got stiff right away am still rock hard.

I only wish that since the neighbor lady being older you should have been able

to put dock her port ( f--k her ) silly as with her up in age she would have extremely loved it with her cunt starved for a young man pole.

Keep on writing but no more butt talk more cunt licking, sucking and plunging with your boner.

Need ch-2

By the way, why can't I find some old gals like these to have fun with!

talemaker333talemaker333almost 8 years ago
Cool

Great granny story, more nasty tongue kissing. Make sure they have hairy pussies!!

sexymeupsexymeupover 7 years ago
farting ?

this was total rubbish, wasted my time reading it. this isn't worth giving any stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I was hoping it would get better....

...but it didn't, it got worse

milfleglovermilflegloverover 6 years ago
Naughty and nice

Love it, the nastier the better!

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