by BebeEversJ
Great story! Please continue!
This is a great story. There are a few misspelled words and some run-on sentences (a good editor could help with that). I look forward to the next part.
Enjoyed this yarn, now off to read some more of your story's.
Great storie. I hope it continues for a while.
Very nice story liked it alot
Average . . . No better than average . . . Keep practicing with part two